Alarm call

For writing this week have been learning how to right interesting and fun stories with a twist at the end.



ALARM CALL

One cold dark night a ugly, green ,furious Creature was creeping and sneaking along trying to find kids to eat, but out of the side of his eye he got  a glimpse of something better,tastier  a nice soft, cute ,kitten. He said to himself ‘ooww I want it’

The wicked Creature was creeping up on the fuzzy Kitten.  The hideous beast had his hands out with his sharp, rotten nails which could rip into the Kittens soul . Meanwhile  as the Creature was sneaking up on the kitten, the floor made a noise CREEEEEEEK! The Creature pauses in awkward position waiting to see if the cat would notice but what the beast  doesn’t know is that the kitten is already awake and he is a master of catfu. As the creature tip toes over to pick up the kitten, it strikes POW! BAM! KABAM!

The creature is as scared of the cat as a lamb looking into the eyes of a ferouis lion. They heard a noise so they stopped  THUMP! THUMP! The cat's owner runs down the stairs

‘What's going on down here!’

What is success

This week we had 4 squares and in the middle it said what does success mean to you at first I didn't really now what successes to me but I had a long think  and now I think a have a pretty good idea in the four squares I had to write and make about what I think success is.