in February 2016 my family went to nelson the main reason we went there is for the NRL game witch was the mighty warriors v the mighty dragons me my dad and my mum where going for the dragons I was so EXCITED because I got to see Josh dugan and Benji Marshall and Russell packer play the game the game was really good and like I thought the dragons smashed the warriors I was so happy that was one of the best days of my life.
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Next time you should ad more adjectives and you could say who was in what team so if somebody didn't know what team they were in you could say
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