I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I really like your blog post that you have done. About olympics and I really like that pic that you have taken because it shows that you are playing basketball in the picture. But for next time I think that you could write a more in the post. But apart from that it is really good !
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Hi Tai, It's me Natalia
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post that you have done. About olympics and I really like that pic that you have taken because it shows that you are playing basketball in the picture. But for next time I think that you could write a more in the post. But apart from that it is really good !
Well done, from Natalia