I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi tai i like your great work it's very good and i like it and i like the way how you needed a Rainbow and the light clouds and dark clouds and i like the way how you needed the little circles to describe the run.
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Hey Tai,Great job maybe next time you could add a blurb. In your blurb you could write how you did and what was the progress.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Tai I only saw some full stops missing from
ReplyDeleteyour sentences, awesome job as well making that as well. I love the rain effect.
Hi Tai i love your Rainbow on your picture it looks amazing but add something more intresting. :)
ReplyDeletehello Tai good job in your work i like how you use a rainbow but you can work on putting more information in you work . from tennessee
ReplyDeleteHi tai i like your great work it's very good and i like it and i like the way how you needed a Rainbow and the light clouds and dark clouds and i like the way how you needed the little circles to describe the run.
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