I was driving down the road when I thought I saw a monument so I parked my van and got all equipment so I could go do some graffiti but as I was walking up to it moved So I quickly crouched down hiding behind a rock but before I knew I saw a bright blue beam coming towards me an I was out. I woke up and it looked like he had taken me to his cave, so I asked him what he's doing and he Told me that I ruined his chance in going back to space and the only time he went back now was in a whole week.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tai
ReplyDeleteCan you have another look, this work is running off the page. Reformat and comment back to me so that I can have another look at your story :)
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