HAPPIER
By Marshmallow
It was my birthday party I was turning 8 years old I wasn't enjoying my party at first everyone was ruining it by being noisy, loud and overall annoying! but the first time I started to have a bit of joy was when my dad brought out this big beautiful cake as I was thinking of what my wish should be I saw a girl run up and she blew my candles out I was so frustrated! It was the worst day of my life at that point of time but I remembered I haven't got my presents yet I started to get a little giddy as I was thinking of what I was going to get, my dad brought out my first present I opened up the big box and got a little surprise I got a big yellow bow I was so thankful for it but at the same time I was a little disappointed and confused at what I had gotten but then my dad said he needs to get something and that he will be back I was wondering why but I left it and put my bow back in the box as I saw my dad walk around the corner he was holding a cute golden receiver puppy it was so fluffy and cute he walked over to me and put it in my arms and told me to put the bow on it one small teardrop rolled out of my eye I hadn't realised at this time but this one day day was going to change my life forever.
(10 YEARS LATER.......)
I was 18 I was in my last year at school this was the worst year ever I had no friends, no body to stick up for me and especially nobody liked me my favourite part of the day that game me just a little bit of joy was P.E were we played football (soccer) I was really good at football even tho I never got picked for any team but that gave me the drive to go home and get better. It was our teams photo day I in front holding the ball getting reading but then I started to get pushed out and I west left on the side but then the camera man started to pull me in and told me to have a smile and enjoy my self as I was opening my mouth to smile I started to hear giggling and laughing my whole team was laughing at me because of my bright yellow braces I had never fault so uncomfortable and not wanted ever in my life, as I got home I chucked the photo and layed down on my bed as I was laying down I was hearing a scratching noise I looked around it was mellow at the door I was so happy to see him.... Later the night I walked into my room and saw him on the ground I ran over to him to see what was happening I realised he wasn't moving or breathing I had the biggest rush of shock and fear I had ever gotten I yelled out to my dad and we rushed to the vet in a rush. As I was staring down the long dark hallway one small tear drop droped from my eye as I realised I was never going to see Mellow again...
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Tai!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your creative writing about the Happier music video. I am impressed with how you used your time well during Music class to get this much writing done.
To make your post even better, I would suggest taking out the big blank space at the bottom, or adding in a photo to fill it up.
- Miss Birtch