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Tuesday 30 June 2020

100 word challenge.

                            100 world challenge -

This morning me & my dad went down to the river to go fishing. We  were catching so much fish so we kept on fishing we ended up fishing till the sun went down, just as we were packing up we heard a rumble in the bushes we didn't think to much of it we thought it was just a possum or something like that but the kept on getting louder until a massive grizzly bear jumped at us out of nowhere. It started to chase us luckily we were halfway to the car so we ran as fast as we could and we were out of there.





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  1. Unknown30 June 2020 at 13:01

    Kia ora Tai

    Thanks for sharing your 100 word story. When you focus, you can create some awesome writing! Next time, I would like to see a proper introduction and conclusion for your writing as that is what a Year 9 quality blog post can look like!

    - Miss Birtch

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