This morning when I woke up I got a massive surprise, there was a gigantic Bubble floating on my front lawn. I went up to it to investigate when out of nowhere it sucked me in and It said “If you could go anywhere, where would it be?” In a quick flash I said my dream location, The moon. Within a second I was on the moon Jumping around and enjoying the view of the earth. Then My vision was gone and everything was black I woke up the next morning confused and wondering what just happened.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Tai
ReplyDeleteI like how you used your imagination by making your setting the moon but I think that your blog would be a lot better if you added a couple more pictures of what happened in your story.
Hello Tai
ReplyDeleteI really like you blog post it is good I like all your punctuation in your blog post maybe next time you should fix up your capital