I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today in Cip we were learning about Needs and Wants and what they mean we had to make an DLO poster about needs and w
ants we had to explain what needs are and what wants are and then we had to explain the things we want and the things we need.
I am pleased to see your DLO posted and I can see some of the improvements you made with feedback from your teachers. That is knowing your next steps and how to make your work better each time.
I wonder if you could try adding some more detail into your blog introductions. Why do you think we are learning about needs and wants? Why is it important to know the difference?
Hey Tai, Its great that you know the difference between needs and wants. There are great stuff you said like "Kyrie Irving all star jersey." As a want. I think that it is great so now you can prepare yourself for the future. I think that you should proof read your writing because you said "Kyrie irving"(the last name in lower case) It was meant to be an uppercase. In conclusion it was a great DLO and I look forward to reading some more amazing things on your blog. Cheers
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Tai!
ReplyDeleteI am pleased to see your DLO posted and I can see some of the improvements you made with feedback from your teachers. That is knowing your next steps and how to make your work better each time.
I wonder if you could try adding some more detail into your blog introductions. Why do you think we are learning about needs and wants? Why is it important to know the difference?
- Miss Birtch
Hey Tai, Its great that you know the difference between needs and wants. There are great stuff you said like "Kyrie Irving all star jersey." As a want. I think that it is great so now you can prepare yourself for the future. I think that you should proof read your writing because you said "Kyrie irving"(the last name in lower case) It was meant to be an uppercase. In conclusion it was a great DLO and I look forward to reading some more amazing things on your blog. Cheers
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